Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 14, 2020
the pig and the cheese stork
This is my fractured fairy tale it is the pig and the cheese stork it has been fractured from Jack and the bean stork to the pig and the cheese stork it starts off with the pig got kicked out from his home with the family pet hammy and he trade him for 3 cheese beans. I used google docs to create this piece of writing it is not finished. What fairy tale would you fracture?
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Hi Caleb!
ReplyDeleteI think that you did really well with your story. I think that next time you should fix some of your grammar mistakes. But overall I think that you did okay.