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Friday, June 5, 2020

Planet Unknown


For writing this week we had to make up our own planet my one is called Planet Unknown. I think I did really good. What would be in your planet?

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  1. G'day Keb Its old mate Jay again pretty mint work you got there you obviously know what my planet would be If you don't it would be called Nummy Treat land Were its just Nummy treats nothing else Some advice I could give is maybe you could explain the task a bit more because I'm not quite shore anyways Great work From your handsome older brother who is way more athletic than you and is giving up gaming Jayden! :)

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  2. G'day Keb (if thats alright can I call you that too)! Its me Lucy for korimako. I really like all the facts about planet unknown.
    Well done!

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  3. Oh you don't want me to call you Keb? Well, ok.

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